Butterfly Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Butterfly

Rating: 5.0


Im homeless
As wonderer as dandelion
Lead me, butterfly!
Over the rainbow gate
Where my lover lives
Among roses
Waiting for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beth L Adams 17 December 2007

This poem is filled with beautiful, colorful images, giving the message to the reader that our souls roam freely in search of the 'significant other' who can add color (life) to our world. Well done! Beth

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... ... 17 December 2007

Butterfly... 'sigh' one of the most colorful and the most beautiful creature God ever created. Is a very colorful poem, so vivid, another jewel from your writings. Well done

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Ewigi Liebe 19 December 2007

Wonderfully done...love it. thanks for sharing

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The final five lines stand by themselves and are the making of this lovely poem. I enjoyed it and was invigorated by it.

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Gregory Collins 11 March 2008

as the butterfly tilts heavenward, it kicks dust up recalling the lost legend

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I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Lovely indeed! A passionate plea!

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Jihad T 20 January 2009

very nice what your pen has made

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What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart... Karin Anderson

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Sarah Abdullah 15 June 2008

Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Such a Nice imagery Thx for sharing ^_^

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