You don't have to rewrite your love lines.
They are coming out just fine.
So by all means, love me.
You're the sand, I'm the sea.
I've never been to the ocean's floor
Or at the brink of death's door.
But I will love you forever more.
short and sweet. I like this one. Not too much words but yet so much meaning to it.
You have something here..i just dont feel its fully developed...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem! I feel like you are saying you don't have much life experience but you do love, just the same.