i tried to stop your calcium intake so that you would never grow
i wanted you to shrink so that i could keep you in my pocket
and you could gnaw through the fabric and plunge onto my toes.
i would walk you everywhere that i go. you would see all that i see
eventually, you would be so small, you would crawl into my ear
and scratch through my skull.
you could infiltrate my thoughts and penetrate my nervous system.
and then maybe you could feel all that i feel and realise that’s it's you.
A very unique and different idea of description of such rare topic....the symbolic representation of something you would want to retain forever is the most uplifting essence of this poem....10/10
Your imagination can go to great lengths in order for others to feel what you do....some fantasies are great enough....to remain within the boundaries of your fertile imagination....beyond that its pure terror...Welcome to the twilight zone........ Cheers. Subroto
Your knowledge of poetic devices both astounds and impresses me. Calcium... never would've thought it myself.
ah desire to wear the lover like breath.... ah the need to have the lovers warmth in blood so there are no glaciers of denial rejection the need to conume lover so envy dies forever
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic idea, lovely write, love with 10+++