Ocean Poem by chloe young

I really like this. There's room for improvement, but not much. Wonderful write. Loved the topic.

Wow... what a poem! I had such vivid images in my head as I read it and it gave me such a peaceful feelings as I read it. ...I hope that the poem is based on your home land of Ireland because I; m going to Dublin this month and I hope its as beautiful as your poem. Thanks

This poem created such beautiful, vivid images Perfect

Oh cHLOE, I love the imagery you had depicted.It soaked deep into my veins and will remain there for a long long time.Great writes dear!

This one was very pleasant. Well... I found it pleasant, I suppose that is a bit more accurate... Thank you so much for sharing this piece with the world, I appreciate it.: -)

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

a lovely piece of writing chloe

I loved this one... extremely well written, your comparison and allusion to the ocean creates a wild visual that compliments your message of becoming yourself with every taste, touch, smell, and thought. You are the ocean, Chloe, keep flowing.

Wonderful imagery portrayed with beautiful words. The freshness of the experience you had can be imagined with calmness over- -whelming......10/10