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Subroto Chatterjee
(8/15/2009 8:51:00 AM) |
Like I mentioned earlier about the twilight zone....erogenous zone....whatever.....under the circumstances, concealed thoughts are less frightening....
Cheers.
Subroto
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Nick Clement
(7/23/2009 5:17:00 PM) |
it's good, straight to the point, very descriptive and powerful emotions, i almost felt someone clutching my heart by the time i've finished, good write x
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Matt Mooney
(7/18/2009 1:16:00 AM) |
You dont beat about the bush in your poems. This one is very intense- I would even say metaphysical if I understand the word properly.Thanks for letting me in to your treasury and you would be welcome in mine. Just click on the door.
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Kale Beaudry
(7/14/2009 5:45:00 PM) |
Provocative, but an incredibly detailed description of becoming one with another. The words flow quickly and efficiently, capturing the effortlessness that went into creating this poem.
The title, 'clutching, ' really paints the scene and your narrative acts it out. Well done.
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Jerry Hughes
(7/11/2009 8:37:00 PM) |
Raunchy to say the least Chloe, but very well written. Warmly, Jerry
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