Can'T You See? Poem by Joseph Cuevas

Can'T You See?

Rating: 4.8


Can't you see what you've done for me,
The happiness and joy, It's you that set me free.
You took the little love I had and made it all that it could be.
Yet you push me away thinking you don't make me happy,
You push me far away, so far not even eyes can see.
But if you'd look into my eyes and feel as i feel,
You would most definately feel my love for you is real.
Without you I'd be nothing but with you I am whole.
Without you I'd be miserable, No one as sweet to care for my soul.
No one else in this world could pay the toll.
The toll of my heart only love can fill that hole.
Not just any love but the love of a girl,
A girl that simply changed my world,
The love of this girl her love so pure and true.
All I can say and all i can do,
Is remind you of our love, remind you that all I'll ever need is you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

This is so lovely and very sweet. You work in emotion very well and its a very pleasant thing to read. It reminds me of just how nice love can be =) I hope this girl realises just how much you love her!

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Carly Hedlund 11 February 2010

Awwww..... That was so sweet. Whoever she is she's really lucky to have your love.

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Twilight Whispers 02 February 2010

That's so honest and beautiful (: You have talent so keep working on it!

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Joseph Cuevas

Joseph Cuevas

Philadelphia, PA
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