Can'T You See Me Poem by tristan loveday

Can'T You See Me

Rating: 2.8


When you smile at me,
a smile appears in my face with a broken heart

when you joke with me, i tease you,
knowing that this will never last

when you look at her, im feeling unlucky
because you cant see my love

when you smile at her, our eyes shine,
for you its love, for me its tears

'whats love? ' you ask me, i say 'i dont know'
but the truth is love=you

we might have one thing in common,
we're both in pain for the one we love

i imagine in ten years time, you with her
and me with someone else

i imagine you coming up to me,
asking for help and ways to surprice her

i wonder how this will end, i wonder what
will happen, am i going to die with regrets or happiness?

until then farewell, my friend?
love?
brother?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
sorry if there are mistakes...i hope you like it :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noreen Carden 17 October 2013

Well written Tristan enjoyed reading this well done

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