Can You? Poem by christopher murphy

Can You?



can you love me
can you mend my broken heart
can you be there when i break down
can you be my support when i stumble
can you pick me up and brush me down
can you wipe the tear from my eye
can you make me smile
can you make me laugh
can you make me sing
can you make my heart beat faster
can you make me feel brand new
can you love me
can you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Love the continue use of can you..... Format brilliant. Makes the reader feel your anxiety... Brilliant and unique

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

i really hope someone can do that for you...great job

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Mamta Agarwal 27 April 2008

its a cry of every heart. but the truth is we cannot depend on anybody but ourselves. the longing for someone who will always be there for you has been nicely captured in your poem.

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