(6/11/54 / Darwen England)

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Candy Floss

Real sticky stuff swirled around a Stick
Put on in layers nice and Thick
Fluffy Balls of Pink and Red
Much bigger than any kids Head
Grinning a big Grin
They stick there head In
And eat that sticky pink Fluff
Like there just ain't Enough
Then one of the kids turn to Me
And say's: that will be $1.50

Submitted: Thursday, March 09, 2006
Edited: Thursday, March 09, 2006


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  • Patricia Gale (3/9/2006 4:40:00 AM)

    Cute. nice rhyme

    Patricia

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  • Gina Onyemaechi (3/9/2006 2:41:00 AM)

    Well, that's made me smile! Have a good day, Davey.

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