Cant Edit Love Poem by JOE POEWHIT
Cant Edit Love
Its in your heart.
Not like a beer fart.
It stays with you.
Just like a solid glue.
Wont ever fail or fall.
Always there at the call.
Never a moment of rest.
Your love is my heart crest.
Cant sell it or loose it.
It is in my heart of life.
The one you love as a wife.
Not like a rotten old fish tail.
KEEP- give me more ALE.
That will fill my lost sail.
May I creep into another Dream flight.
There you are in my sight.
Your love I can never EDIT.
I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT.
Love is beyond expression and editing. I enjoyed your expression. Thanks dear poewhit.
a harsh and gentle outlook, with a realistic commentary of love best wishes Shimon
YOU WENT TOO MUCH INOT REALISM... A NICE REALISTIC AND UNPRETENTIOUS STYLE OF POETRY... :)
It's a nice poem. You are lucky you have got such a loving husband and you are a wise person because you want to cling to him.
inspiring hope you dont mind if i send it to fadzie! good job man.
‘…Your love I can never EDIT. // I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT’ FINEST FINISH...AND ITS EDITIND LOVE LOL! IN LACONIC WAY…10+ MS. NIVEDITA UK.
Nice one.................................................................
A love poem with a 'fart' in the middle...interesting....Ha!
I love the idea - you can't edit love. How totally true. This was brilliant.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 6:58:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wish I had some beer goggles on for this read...LOL