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Rajkumar Mukherjee

(26TH JANUARY / KOLKATA, INDIA)

CANVASS-1


CANVASS—1




I like red colour always

Like ten horses who drags

The chariot of sun

Your fingertips enameled

With red nail-polish

The under-water plants

With blackish red leaves- akin to blood


You spread this blood everyday

On the dry earth

In the name of religion

In disguise of revolt

Sometimes thru air-attacks

Or the marching of armies with bullets


But how valuable is this red

Without a dropp of which

The life becomes a white canvass

Rajkumar@Kolkata
17-05-2009

Submitted: Monday, May 18, 2009

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  • C. P. Sharma (5/30/2009 5:01:00 AM)

    Amazing poetic skill and a vey well summed up message:

    But how valuable is this red

    Without a dropp of which

    The life becomes a white canvass

    Thanks,
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (5/21/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    I like this very well presented poem, with so many comparisons and relevant imagery. An amazing write.Very well expressed and very worthy of 10/10 from me. (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/20/2009 6:26:00 AM)

    yes very true indeed..though we dont like to see bloody massacres filled with red blood..the world will be a pale/lifeless place without living...it ll turn out to be a barren red canvass indeed..thanks..for sharing..very creative indeed 10++ (Report) Reply

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