Rajkumar Mukherjee

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Canvass-2(Blue) -Revised - Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

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CANVASS—2(blue) -revised

(Devoted to Mrs Catrina Heart a great poet of Phillipines)


I like blue sky

deep blue sea

your blue eyes

depth of which is unfathomable



I like the way the blue sky

sees its face in the sea

I fail to understand

wasn’t it your eyes on me?



I like the delft-blue porcelain

glazed with oxide of tin

that carried along

three

dynasty of Italy,

France and Spain



but I never liked

the blue-blood royals

whose uncontrolled passion,

greed

have destroyed

village after village

in the name of making them loyal


Rajkumar@ Kolkata
18-05-2009
Rajkumar Mukherjee


Comments about Canvass-2(Blue) -Revised by Rajkumar Mukherjee

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (6/8/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    Very clear blue images in this piece...good write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/30/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    I like your expressions..very creative and imaginative..nice to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points C. P. Sharma (5/30/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    Poetry with profundity.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (5/30/2009 3:54:00 AM)

    expressive poem..a nice piece to read..naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/26/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    abeautiful poem with beautiful with multiple thoughts and images..the beautiful blue sky while looking from high to it's beautiful image in a calm sea...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Marie Shine (5/26/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    A beautiful and very descriptive poem.
    Applying the colour blue in different shades to different things.
    Nice crisp imagery and smooth flow.
    10/10 from me. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, May 29, 2009


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