The Moon is my night
And the sun is my light
The air that I breathe
Caresses me.....
The sea is my flow
And the earth is where I grow
To blossom and explore
Tis the life I'd like to adore
Into a world
Filled with a heaven that I know
Some lovely images here Suzan. Like how the pace slows down after 'caresses me' - it's as if the read has taken that breath of air with you. Kind regards, Justine.
A little T & S, here, Suzan....Tranquility & Serenity....a skilled penning, indeed '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}
Well done Suzan, This graceful poems conveys a mood reminiscent of Emily Dickinson. Robert
Very beautiful, sort of pantheistic view on life and earth.
Yes, Mother Earth (like any other mother on earth) cares for us and caresses us with her several arms like the Air etc. Maternal love is seldom found wanting but it is filial love that often falters. Your poem reminds us that we should also prove ourselves worthy of the love of Mother Earth. Since we are all the children of the same Mother Earth, we should stop bickerig and turn our attention to serving her in the best possible manner with our hands locked in fraternal friendship. A fine piece of poem.
What a lovely poem! I really like this one. This is a theme I've ascribed myself to likewise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem with nice imagery.....