Caressing The Earth Poem by suzan gumush

Caressing The Earth

Rating: 3.5


The Moon is my night
And the sun is my light
The air that I breathe
Caresses me.....
The sea is my flow
And the earth is where I grow
To blossom and explore
Tis the life I'd like to adore
Into a world
Filled with a heaven that I know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 17 October 2006

beautiful poem with nice imagery.....

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R H 17 October 2006

Some lovely images here Suzan. Like how the pace slows down after 'caresses me' - it's as if the read has taken that breath of air with you. Kind regards, Justine.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2006

A little T & S, here, Suzan....Tranquility & Serenity....a skilled penning, indeed '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

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Robert Howard 09 November 2006

Well done Suzan, This graceful poems conveys a mood reminiscent of Emily Dickinson. Robert

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Zen Bojczuk 09 January 2007

That is the word for this poem... graceful. I like it too.

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Krince 30 May 2018

Very good poem

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Goran Gustafsson 03 March 2009

Very beautiful, sort of pantheistic view on life and earth.

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 23 December 2008

Yes, Mother Earth (like any other mother on earth) cares for us and caresses us with her several arms like the Air etc. Maternal love is seldom found wanting but it is filial love that often falters. Your poem reminds us that we should also prove ourselves worthy of the love of Mother Earth. Since we are all the children of the same Mother Earth, we should stop bickerig and turn our attention to serving her in the best possible manner with our hands locked in fraternal friendship. A fine piece of poem.

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Liebling Jacobsen 19 October 2008

Short, sweet and very awesome

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 13 October 2008

What a lovely poem! I really like this one. This is a theme I've ascribed myself to likewise.

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