Eve Merriam (19 July 1916 – 11 April 1992 / Philadelphia, Pennsylvania)
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Catch a Little Rhyme
Once upon a time
I caught a little rhyme
I set it on the floor
but it ran right out the door
I chased it on my bicycle
but it melted to an icicle
I scooped it up in my hat
but it turned into a cat
I caught it by the tail
but it stretched into a whale
I followed it in a boat
but it changed into a goat
When I fed it tin and paper
it became a tall skyscraper
Then it grew into a kite
and flew far out of sight...
Eve Merriam
Submitted: Monday, January 20, 2003
Read poems about / on: cat, time, change, running
Poems by Eve Merriam : 1 / 3
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I really liked and enjoyed this imaginative flight of fancy. Yet feel the last stanza does not fit. The 'tall skyscraper/ Then it grew into a kite' would be better as
'When I fed it tin and paper
it became a tall skyscraper
Then it shrank into a kite
and flew far out of sight...' Just my opinion, the image fits better.
My teacher plagerised your poem and said it was hers.
haha, nice poem defenitely, a bit like one other of mine but mines on magic... great write
Regards VJ
i thought this was a nice poem