Caught In The Rain Poem by Bill Cantrell

Caught In The Rain

Rating: 5.0


I can smell the rains of poetry,
Coming my way
Magic is in the air
Ominous clouds tower to the heavens floor,
As they touch,
Lightning strikes the good green earth,
Making a path to those in need
I have waited countless nights,
That I might by chance make love with the dawn
And now a monsoon grants my wish
Dear friends, poetry is more than personal,
It is love coupled with confessions,
Exclusive trust that she will not betray you
In a deep sleep, she tells me,
I'm in a dream,
Prodding me to control my subconscious,
That I direct my steps wherever I wish
Blessed is she,
For she knows my needs,
Telling me I am the only one,
For poetry knows we are selfish,
We as any lover wants her all to ourselves
As a child demands full attention from its mother
For only with the closeness of full trust,
Does one pour our their heart,
On poetry's lap
I know very well how to weep
As there are many doors for emotions to exit
Yet, with poetry,
The rains come and I am readjusted
She does allow me to flirt with music,
My pen is my pick,
And I slaughter the blues
If I bend the strings just so,
She hears my calling from up above
And she eventually comes to me,
Face to face
I must tell you,
Her eyes are in complete harmony, with her smile
With such beauty,
I find myself happy to be her fool,
I gladly stand in the rain,
Cherishing every drop
I will fill every vessel,
To carry me through the scorching heat,
When the droughts encompass the land
And melancholy distorts both night and day
Now my friends,
It is time to get wet,
To dance and sing in the rain
So,
Let it rain,
Let the floods of inspiration come!

Caught In The Rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was working in my man cave when a poem quickly came to me and the only thing I had to write on was Sheetrock tape, I know every poet gets caught off guard with a poem now and then
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 15 May 2021

How powerful and movingly expressed! .. Of such heart and soul! .. May your heart always dance, pen by your side, touching the beauty of the skies! .. Another poem that's so beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Cowboy Ron Williams 31 July 2020

I can tell that you think in a much more abstract way than I do. I am a simple soul, and new at writing. I have a lot to learn.

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Susan Williams 31 July 2020

Thank goodness for sheetrock tape because these lines are awesome and your poem is chock full of beautiful lines- - > : I can smell the rains of poetry, / Coming my way / Magic is in the air< - - - Never has this creative feeling been expressed better. Never.10++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Ruta Mohapatra 29 July 2020

And she eventually comes to me, Face to face...…….. So true! Yes, we all know that feeling. When inspiration comes out of nowhere, one has to get out the lines immediately, then only peace comes!

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