Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Cave - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

(dedicated to Georgia Girl)

I sit down and watch Oprah program
Tenderly thousands of torches fly high
Who’s embracing homeless children?
Mermaids seduce iceberg to melt down
Fountains of Frankfurt smile to us
My best regards to blind ravens

(inspired by Rolling Stones’ Start Me Up)

Comments about Cave by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • Rookie - 69 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/16/2008 6:48:00 PM)

    Compelling & funny. What more to say Ahmad? you have the wit to digest everything & i love them all (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/6/2008 2:20:00 AM)

    lol! ! my hugs to tom cruise................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (12/3/2008 6:49:00 PM)

    well written i love it...

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ana Dasilva (12/3/2008 6:16:00 PM)

    Nice poem....Well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Morning Star (11/30/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    insoiring poem,
    nicely written..
    great (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (11/25/2008 4:42:00 PM)

    A lot of people are blind to plights while professing them. OPHRAH is a good person had a hard life growing up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (11/25/2008 8:10:00 AM)

    Very cute piece. lol Seem to be on a song theme. Great job. Inspiration from music is awesome at times. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008