Cave Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Cave

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Georgia Girl)

I sit down and watch Oprah program
Tenderly thousands of torches fly high
Who’s embracing homeless children?
Mermaids seduce iceberg to melt down
Fountains of Frankfurt smile to us
My best regards to blind ravens

(inspired by Rolling Stones’ Start Me Up)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 25 November 2008

Very cute piece. lol Seem to be on a song theme. Great job. Inspiration from music is awesome at times.

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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2008

A lot of people are blind to plights while professing them. OPHRAH is a good person had a hard life growing up.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 16 December 2008

Compelling & funny. What more to say Ahmad? you have the wit to digest everything & i love them all

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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

lol! ! my hugs to tom cruise.................

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well written i love it... Krista

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Ana Dasilva 03 December 2008

Nice poem....Well written

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Little Morning Star 30 November 2008

insoiring poem, nicely written.. great

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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