Treasure Island

Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Celestial Dance

Stars I gazed
In my dream
Myself growing
Larger and larger
Playing like
A child
Handling toys
Stars and planets
And dancing
One step
On a star
And next
On another
Many suns
Brighter than
The sun
Under feet
Fire walker
Of the universe
Traversing space
No resound
The dance
So true
It seemed.

Submitted: Friday, November 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 05, 2014

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  • Ramesh Rai (11/15/2013 7:31:00 PM)

    celestial dance the great dance the dance of Lord Shiva the great dancer of the creation. a lovely imagination. loved it (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (11/8/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    So beautifully put together Tirupathi. You must have been laying out under the stars. Magic and saved, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (11/8/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    Dancing with the stars is a beautiful write. This poem is very interesting.
    Very light hearted and out of this world. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/8/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    This dance in ether amid the celestial bodies, with you turning into another glowing star has all the beauty and grace of a lively waltz! Enjoyed your dream! ! (Report) Reply

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