Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Celestial Dance - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Stars I gazed
In my dream
Myself growing
Larger and larger
Playing like
A child
Handling toys
Stars and planets
And dancing
One step
On a star
And next
On another
Many suns
Brighter than
The sun
Under feet
Fire walker
Of the universe
Traversing space
No resound
The dance
So true
It seemed.

Comments about Celestial Dance by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Gold Star - 18,253 Points Ramesh Rai (11/15/2013 7:31:00 PM)

    celestial dance the great dance the dance of Lord Shiva the great dancer of the creation. a lovely imagination. loved it (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,109 Points Lyn Paul (11/8/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    So beautifully put together Tirupathi. You must have been laying out under the stars. Magic and saved, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,236 Points Patricia Grantham (11/8/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    Dancing with the stars is a beautiful write. This poem is very interesting.
    Very light hearted and out of this world. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,273 Points Valsa George (11/8/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    This dance in ether amid the celestial bodies, with you turning into another glowing star has all the beauty and grace of a lively waltz! Enjoyed your dream! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,999 Points Neela Nath Das (11/8/2013 12:48:00 AM)

    A cosmic dream.Loved very much! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014

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