Celestial Dance Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Celestial Dance

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Stars I gazed
In my dream
Myself growing
Larger and larger
Playing like
A child
Handling toys
Stars and planets
And dancing
One step
On a star
And next
On another
Many suns
Brighter than
The sun
Under feet
Fleeting
Fire walker
Sound
Of the universe
Traversing space
No resound
Music
Eternal
The dance
Celestial
Celebration
Dream
So true
It seemed.

Friday, November 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: dance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 15 November 2013

celestial dance the great dance the dance of Lord Shiva the great dancer of the creation. a lovely imagination. loved it

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Lyn Paul 08 November 2013

So beautifully put together Tirupathi. You must have been laying out under the stars. Magic and saved, thank you

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Patricia Grantham 08 November 2013

Dancing with the stars is a beautiful write. This poem is very interesting. Very light hearted and out of this world. Nice.

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Valsa George 08 November 2013

This dance in ether amid the celestial bodies, with you turning into another glowing star has all the beauty and grace of a lively waltz! Enjoyed your dream! !

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Neela Nath Das 08 November 2013

A cosmic dream.Loved very much!

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