Ellirie Aviles


Changed - Poem by Ellirie Aviles

As clouds grew dark
and lightning sparks
As rain approach
with thunder in caroche

Envelop by nobility
yet ironically full of agony
Caught thee with tears
driven by fears

howbeit time was fast
anew the memory rain brought
The agony had lasted
at last Light was sought

As clouds grew dark
I feel so bright
As rain approach
I remember my Light.


Comments about Changed by Ellirie Aviles

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/10/2013 12:13:00 AM)

    Enjoyed the weird play, nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 32,626 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/9/2013 11:39:00 PM)

    enveloped by nobility, good write,
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, May 10, 2013


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