Chaos Of Christmas Near Poem by Lee Fones

Chaos Of Christmas Near



hustle bustle in the shops
computers always down
however time it never stops
in Christmas rush i drown
afterwards i decide to plop

whacked by pushchairs
whacked by trolley
whacked by wheelchair
whacked by kids prams with dolly
looking forward to relax in chair

my blood pressure it does arise
hearing babies and kiddie cries
parents saying maybe next year
how that parent lies
as the chaos of Christmas near

Monday, November 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2014

Hello again poet Lee, nice work and great little poem. Have a great week, Loyd

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Gajanan Mishra 24 November 2014

very fine writing my dear poets, thanks..

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2014

Hello poet friend lee. I enjoyed your poem which captures one of the true pictures of Christmas. I found it smooth and enjoyable. FYI: I might have written the last verse as follows: my blood pressure it does arise hearing babies and kiddie cries parents saying maybe next year how that parent lies as the chaos of Christmas near Just a thought. Loyd

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