Chick On Wings......... Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Chick On Wings.........

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Dawning golden rays, still not appearing...!
Usual morning breeze.... seems remaining calm
Early morn avian choir, sounded enjoying a break
Found myself too, still in bed, at nine AM

Rattling, rumbling and crackling, at day-breaks
Silenced, all of a sudden, as a rare occurrence
as if it is a resting day, for the world, by far
felt lazy to know even,the reasonbehind

Auto, forgetting its routine enlivening rumble
in a slumber, like, throwing the day in to a lull
Lively nest under my own warmly shell
is in a muteness, not seeing she chick as well

Awakening, memories of last night's affairs
packing bags 'n baggage with all sorts of things
a country-dinner, sans country-music and all that
painted faintly our chick, taking againto wings

Chick On Wings.........
Saturday, August 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: detachment,loneliness,travelling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cartoon illustration - curtsy Inter-net.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

Awakening, memories of last night's affairs packing bags 'n baggage with all sorts of things a country-dinner, sans country-music and all that painted faintly our chick, taking againto wings........impressive lines, I love these. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Valsa George 07 August 2018

When we go on a vacation, we are never in a hurry to wake up! No household chores to be attended....! The world also might appear to be taking rest..........! So we curl under the sheet and lie on our bed! Such breaks are necessary for the entire family! A beautiful poem!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 07 August 2018

Thank you very much for the comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 August 2018

Beautiful poem. Sometimes we like to go away from the crowd and enjoy loneliness in a far off place. Enjoyed the poem.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 05 August 2018

Thak you Anil for the comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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