Love, flowing like a river
In your chaste heart
Where I'm a child,
Wheeping at your shore.
Know not, how to swim,
In your swell of love!
Know not, how to drink,
The taste of your love!
Eish, friend, this is too deep for any words... I'm also drowning, because I really can't swim... Really beautiful poem...
Tell me a word to describe a wow... because i just love this poem, it really sweet and i feel you find back your warming sun after all soaked in iced tears..Vipins, this poem really good one, i enjoyed every lines :) _Unwritten Soul
Very kind sentiments, the words become at ease with the scene it portrays.
People say short is sweet and brevity soul of speech. What an amazing short poem it is! It walked straight in to the street of my heart........ BEAUTY flows in your heart, And love from your river. It was thrill to see such a cute poem on a child. Everybody knows child is cute. But this poems is more cuter that child itself. A noble poem by noble poet. Now i understood why Vipins is on Top 10 poets among the popularity list. A loud cheers and a big treat to the poet. A remarkable poem............................ If i got to grade your poem A1 is my rating..............10+++++
People say short is sweet and brevity soul of speech. What amazing short poem it is! It walked straight to my heart. BEAUTY flows in your heart, And love from your river. It was thrill to see such a cute poem on child. Everybody knows child is cute. But this poems is more cuter that child itself. A noble poem by noble poet. Now i understood why Vipins is on Top 10 poets among the popularity list. A loud cheers and a big treat to the poet. A remarkable poem............................
Where I'm a child, Wheeping at your shore. Know not, how to swim In your swell of love. Short but so sweet.
Very powerful. I really enjoyed this one. Short and filled with emotion. Great work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A really beautiful poem. I love this. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, drugs and the cheats.