Child Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Child

Rating: 4.7


Love, flowing like a river
In your chaste heart
Where I'm a child,
Wheeping at your shore.
Know not, how to swim,
In your swell of love!
Know not, how to drink,
The taste of your love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 23 October 2011

A really beautiful poem. I love this. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, drugs and the cheats.

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Jacqui Broad 23 October 2011

Eish, friend, this is too deep for any words... I'm also drowning, because I really can't swim... Really beautiful poem...

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

Tell me a word to describe a wow... because i just love this poem, it really sweet and i feel you find back your warming sun after all soaked in iced tears..Vipins, this poem really good one, i enjoyed every lines :) _Unwritten Soul

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Dead Leaf 24 October 2011

nice poem.........simple but beautiful...

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Louis Cecile 24 October 2011

Very kind sentiments, the words become at ease with the scene it portrays.

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Surya . 03 November 2011

great and amazing write. surya

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Harindhar Reddy 29 October 2011

People say short is sweet and brevity soul of speech. What an amazing short poem it is! It walked straight in to the street of my heart........ BEAUTY flows in your heart, And love from your river. It was thrill to see such a cute poem on a child. Everybody knows child is cute. But this poems is more cuter that child itself. A noble poem by noble poet. Now i understood why Vipins is on Top 10 poets among the popularity list. A loud cheers and a big treat to the poet. A remarkable poem............................ If i got to grade your poem A1 is my rating..............10+++++

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Harindhar Reddy 29 October 2011

People say short is sweet and brevity soul of speech. What amazing short poem it is! It walked straight to my heart. BEAUTY flows in your heart, And love from your river. It was thrill to see such a cute poem on child. Everybody knows child is cute. But this poems is more cuter that child itself. A noble poem by noble poet. Now i understood why Vipins is on Top 10 poets among the popularity list. A loud cheers and a big treat to the poet. A remarkable poem............................

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

Where I'm a child, Wheeping at your shore. Know not, how to swim In your swell of love. Short but so sweet.

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Stefanie Fontker 25 October 2011

Very powerful. I really enjoyed this one. Short and filled with emotion. Great work.

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