Theodora (Theo) Onken

Rookie - 177 Points (Washington State)

Circles~


The bougainvillea are blooming
Everywhere Spring is leaving her mark
Vestiges of beauty embroidering the landscape
Morning breaks into it's hot pinks~gone 'tis the dark;
Flashing it's bashful sky ever upwards
Eventually lapping itself into a cobalt blue
With nary a cloud dancing- in thin air
SpringTide arrives~brand new;
Time ticks the moments off~waving in afternoon
Windows of lemon yellow~ simply glow
The sun, in all of it's radiance
Puts on a glittery jewel of a show;
Soon twilight arrives a bit dimmer
The birds and their song they still sing
The mountains trees in full bloom
Shadows that the approaching night brings;
Dusk calls for a return to sweet sleep
The whole world prepares to tuck itself in
A repose for Mother Earth has arrived
Slumbering in stillness-'til a new Spring day begins again;


By, Theodora Onken

April 28,2012

A complete day of Spring

Submitted: Sunday, April 28, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Circles~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken )

  • Rookie - 177 Points Theodora Onken (4/28/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    Valerie, Diane and Hari, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and to comment. You are so very appreciated by me. Many blessings! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,175 Points Valerie Dohren (4/28/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    Lovely descriptive poem, very atmospheric and a delight to read. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,398 Points Diane Hine (4/28/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    A busy time of the year. Lovely, the way you build our anticipation for the next rosy morning! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (4/28/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    Cinematic effect! Nature from dawn to dusk is painted with pen. Wonderful pictorial quality, Theo. (Report) Reply

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