It shall echo the screams of the damned
brutal and loud their suffering will pierce all that hear
it shall be horrifyingly worse than any mortal's fear
No light just the shadows of darkness
Their bodies burned in pits hotter then hell
repeated ova and over by an evil spell
And who shall command this place of the Damned?
Greater deamons more wicked than the devil
This shall add to the Damned's peril
And who shall be sent to this city of the Damned?
Thoes few who have betrayed me
And for this they will suffer for eternity
So i say to all take heed
4 if you betray me i will place you in remand
And suffer the pains in the depths of the Damned
wow..beautifully written i love dark poetry..it was marvelous..~hazel
Ramon, those who betray should be sent to the city of the damned. If they betray one, then they will betray all other who cross their path. Yet another great poem my friend. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sends a message of truth to remind those who betray where they are heading. The only problem is there are far too many of them out there. Lol. Beautifully and very well crafted. Give you 10. Best wishes.