```city Of The Damned (Epic Soul Story) ``` Poem by Soul Writer

```city Of The Damned (Epic Soul Story) ```

Rating: 5.0


It shall echo the screams of the damned

brutal and loud their suffering will pierce all that hear

it shall be horrifyingly worse than any mortal's fear


No light just the shadows of darkness

Their bodies burned in pits hotter then hell

repeated ova and over by an evil spell


And who shall command this place of the Damned?

Greater deamons more wicked than the devil

This shall add to the Damned's peril


And who shall be sent to this city of the Damned?

Thoes few who have betrayed me

And for this they will suffer for eternity


So i say to all take heed

4 if you betray me i will place you in remand

And suffer the pains in the depths of the Damned

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzan Gumush 29 July 2008

sends a message of truth to remind those who betray where they are heading. The only problem is there are far too many of them out there. Lol. Beautifully and very well crafted. Give you 10. Best wishes.

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Evaughn Gray 23 February 2008

wow..beautifully written i love dark poetry..it was marvelous..~hazel

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Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

Good poem but such darkness, where is the light. Melvina

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dead before I died 10 July 2007

I like the macabe tone of this piece!

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David Harris 19 June 2007

Ramon, those who betray should be sent to the city of the damned. If they betray one, then they will betray all other who cross their path. Yet another great poem my friend. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it. David

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