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Priyanka Bhowmick (6/18/2009 4:57:00 AM)
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a butiful msg.. lets clean mind wid organic facials... lovely...10++
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Howard Kern (6/17/2009 10:50:00 PM)
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You have been truely blessed! ! !
Keep that bullet-poof mind behind your iron-curtin! ! !
A clear mind comes to me with my morning meditation.
It is the only way to recharge my gift that flows to the page effortlessly!
very nice write 10+++
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (6/2/2009 8:22:00 PM)
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let us clean our mind.. that should be message loud n clear... beautiful...10
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Jasmin Whyte (6/1/2009 5:26:00 PM)
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Some sage advice here, like that revenge boomerangs back. That's some insight!
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Maia Padua (5/18/2009 9:06:00 AM)
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a great piece...
conveys a great meaning...
thoughts' provoking...as always
thanks for sharing, Sir
10++
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rago rago (5/16/2009 10:14:00 AM)
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to clean mind............last lines really provoked to think......... you have penned well............see my 10 ***
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Marie Shine (5/13/2009 11:02:00 AM)
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A beautiful well written and presented poem Ashraful.
A deep and insightful poem.
Wonderful comparisons ie 'Revenge returning like a boomerang' - simile and image - brilliant.
A well deserved 10 from me.
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Subroto Chatterjee (5/5/2009 6:21:00 AM)
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I think your stint at the Bangladesh Agricultural Development Corporation has given you sufficient fodder for your amazing poems..
Case in point are the names of various flora/fauna mentioned by you...
Cheers.
Subroto
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Antonio Liao (4/26/2009 8:16:00 PM)
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in a world of superficiality, all looks like something the mind can't see
yet! so real that everybody wants to close their eyes, and don't like to
feel of what is today....such a poem that target the truth of what is
going back to the beginning of seeing the world as it exist....
what beautiful poem, that should be read to all mankind...thank you
and God bless....a 10++++++
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