Cliff Side Is The Wrong Side...* Poem by elysabeth faslund

Thank goodness for then we wouldn't have all your words... Reading this, it has the rhythm of a song...It would be a good song using as a chorus beginning 'I had other plans You See.' Super write Lizbeth. ~~marci. :) ~~

lyrical piece! i could almost find the beat, the melody, the chords to it. Flows forth from you like a midnight drive under a full moon, huh. best care bud, sjg

A memorable moment brought poetically and dramatically to life through your magical pen. Terrifying and rhythmical ride Sometimes I do believe we have 'someone' 'somewhere' looking after us. love, Allie xxxx

This one just hit me right today. Take time to smell the roses hit me just right today thanks mike.

Great story and write. Loved the way the second verse and the last perfectly complimented the story... a story to scary to tell while looking at the cliff. Zen

I like this one Elysabeth you can taste the Adrenaline and feel the Tension, glad you got out to write about. Take care and have fun. David x