Color Critic Poem by suxanne popp

Color Critic

Rating: 5.0


Why does it bother me
That the juice of the plum
At the heart of the poem
Should not be maroon?

Did I not feel the heartbeat
Of a mother birthng her loss?
As the fledging left her hand
Jar shattering, ripe womanhood
Spilled?
What was that color then?
We all know it. Saffron? No.
Fuchsia? Close. Not pink, nor purple,
And, definitely, not maroon.
By concentrating on the hue
I escape the pain
Of my vermillion loss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 August 2009

Artistic hand that paints a vivid and beautiful colors of agony and pain.Well done Suxanne.

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Graham Russell 10 August 2009

yes thanks for sharing.........10

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Marieta Maglas 10 August 2009

nice poem, thank you for sharing.......10

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