In this colourful, magical world,
7 billion people on earth,
I walk around them...
I see smiles,
but behind them I know there's hurt.
Sometimes, people are really mean,
Trust me everywhere I go, I've seen,
whether it's an old man or woman,
or it's a middle-aged man or woman,
or even teens.
You're beautiful, special and unique,
don't let words make you feel like a freak.
Just forgive and smile for real,
instead of going black or white,
go to red, orange, yellow or blue,
there's also green and purple too!
wherever you are,
whatever you do,
know those colours, in your heart,
you should keep,
even in your sleep,
dream...
about the colours of the rainbow.
hey aisha so this is a very cute poem *i loove how happy and super positive it is * although you need some imagery to make it more rich and catchy in general very good ...keep it up girl
Thank you although I don't need to make it more rich or catchy it's just a poem I wrote my own way. If I wanted to be catchy and all that I would have done that. Thanks again x
second sstanza needs work........you repeated words there, tighten things more to make it a wonderful poem..the begining of the poem is super..you are a lovely poetess..love your poems...
I got meanings. ummmmm.... nice. Can i say it in your words? You're beautiful, special and unique.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice poem with a nice message.. Thank you for sharing Aisha :)