Come On Kill Me! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Come On Kill Me!

Rating: 4.9


Come on kill me!
You have the dragger
And I have the soul
We both have our means
We both have our goals

You, the symbol of evil
Gather your courage
Strike with the might
When you see my soul

Ah, now you wonder
When I say my soul
You like to play with the body
You enjoy deceiving
You, rebel, the outcast

You hit below the belt
Yet you say I am the courageous.
Your silly invitations are your weapons
Your preach treasury
You show the ways to usury

Gather your weapons
Give a last try
Why keep waiting for the opportunity
You must come and strike now
Before my soul departs saying goodbye

Monday, June 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

Yes, the body can be killed but the spirit lives on

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Nosheen Irfan 20 June 2016

Wonderful write. Body is vulnerable but soul is invincible. Death can only strike the body. Nothing can destroy the soul. A very thoughtful n philosophical write.10

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Darren Jkoeryo 30 July 2016

Interesting write Man...10

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Sara Militello 24 June 2016

You know! You know that the soul is untouchable by evil! That evil needs permission! Would that more people knew that so they would not stand trembling in fear...Wonderfully expressed.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

Why all these hatred and the wars around us? ! Yes, we both have our goals on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 20 June 2016

Thank you, Asim ji, for sharing a wonderful poem putting across a philosophical message: Come on kill me! / Strike with the might / When you see my soul / Give a last try / Before my soul departs saying goodbye

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 June 2016

Nothing can kill a free spirited soul... Loved the open challenge... Now let's take death by it's horn which has been instilling fear in the living heart. Very nice poem.10

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