A million reason to abandon your love
Yet just one to stay
Does commitment rings a bell?
Till death do us part
A vague memory
like a fat white cloud
floats in blue sky
Its visual appearance all but dull
But hidden there are millions of vapors
All pointing to one thing
Water is always there
Its shape and form invisible
Love travels through many channels
To thrive and abide in commitment.
Love is like water. Water is always there Its shape and form invisible Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you.
Thank you chandini for an appreciative comment. Just read your new poem and left a comment. so good to see a young girl using the power of pen. My best wishes for you.
A million reason to abandon your love Yet just one to stay Does commitment rings a bell? Simple lines, but so deep and meaningful. Enjoyed the poem, Ma'am.
An intensive poem so nicely and aptly presented. Favourite lines are....Love travels through many channels To thrive and abide in commitment.. Thnaks for sharing. .....10
Starting together is easy, staying together takes work! You have done well to remind us of what commitment reply represents. Excellent poem. PEACE
Love travels through many channels To thrive and abide in commitment. Inspite of many reasons to drift apart, we stick together to a commitment as love travels through many channels....! A thoughtful write, open and frank! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very thoughtful write. Nice.