Treasure Island

Savita Tyagi


Commitment


A million reason to abandon your love
Yet just one to stay
Does commitment rings a bell?

Till death do us part
A vague memory
like a fat white cloud
floats in blue sky
Its visual appearance all but dull
But hidden there are millions of vapors
All pointing to one thing
Water is always there
Its shape and form invisible
Love travels through many channels
To thrive and abide in commitment.

Submitted: Thursday, May 01, 2014

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  • Susan Lacovara (5/25/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    Starting together is easy, staying together takes work! You have done well to remind us of what commitment reply represents. Excellent poem. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (5/6/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    Love travels through many channels
    To thrive and abide in commitment.

    Inspite of many reasons to drift apart, we stick together to a commitment as love travels through many channels....! A thoughtful write, open and frank! ! (Report) Reply

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