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Commonwealth of body, mind and soul

Commonwealth of body, mind and soul

Submitted: Tuesday, October 16, 2012


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Commonwealth of body, mind and soul

The universe or community is a commonwealth
Of free bodies and souls and their strength
But we don't realize this and divide the commonwealth in narrow zones, of family or otherwise
Plato's concept, a tribal clan or a big joint family are all commonwealths of different size.

Even a God father's familial gang, Soviet experiment of state as family or a religious 'Ashram'
Display the same commonwealth system
The larger group as a family with common parents free consenting sex and pervasive friendship
It is possible with progress of reproductive technology and spiritual kinship.

Shocking to many but very exciting is the prospect of this commonwealth!
We are all, god's children
Fragile shapes floating in oceanic energy field for our own health
Free mobile assembly of souls and bodies, without any string or burden.

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