Jeannette Heywood

Confetti - Poem by Jeannette Heywood

Light and white, fluffy, like snowflakes.
Flower girls stoop to pluck them for keepsakes.

A rainbow of paper o'er us floats down.
It sticks to our hair, your sleeve and my gown.

Some falls swiftly to ground, a rainbow path we now tread.
Some slowly, gently, flutters overhead.

With each handful, blessings they bestow.
For true love between us ever to flow.

A colourful cloud the two of us covers.
Soul-mates, now spouses and forever lovers.

We watch paper charms of good luck glide us by.
Our future wishes and dreams alongside them fly.

Topic(s) of this poem: wedding

Comments about Confetti by Jeannette Heywood

  • Gold Star - 21,693 Points Terry Craddock (4/7/2015 10:04:00 PM)

    really loved the imagery, snowflakes keepsakes, rainbows, colourful clouds, paper charmed, I'm a fan :) (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:35:00 AM)

    Thanks Terry. Imagery is important to me.

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,118 Points Michelle Claus (4/7/2015 8:30:00 PM)

    Sweet. I don't really identify with young newlywed love any more, but I value your imagery. We readers can see what you see through this descriptive poem. (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:37:00 AM)

    Thanks Michelle. I wrote this poem following my daughter's wedding.

  • Gold Star - 71,635 Points Kelly Kurt (4/7/2015 4:42:00 PM)

    Wonderfully described, Jeanette. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:38:00 AM)

    Thank you Kelly for the inspiration to write more.

  • Silver Star - 3,032 Points Brian Stafford (4/7/2015 10:49:00 AM)

    I got pelted with hailstone, but at least it was white! congrats on poem of the day as well! (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:38:00 AM)

    Thanks Brian.

  • Gold Star - 5,579 Points John Richter (4/7/2015 7:35:00 AM)

    Wow, you were really lucky. I got pelted with rice when I was stupid, er, I mean married... :) my right eye still twitches a bit after all these years.... Pretty poem though, a bit mushy I think, but certainly young couples ought to live in such a world... (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:41:00 AM)

    Thanks John. I wrote this one whilst reminiscing about my daughter's wedding. I hope couples of all ages can live in such a world!

  • Silver Star - 3,645 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (4/7/2015 4:58:00 AM)

    nice poem...wish you all the very best in life, Jeanette... (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 690 Points Jeannette Heywood (4/8/2015 4:43:00 AM)

    How lovely of you Jasbir. Thank you. I wish you the very best in life also.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 5, 2014

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