Confinement Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
Confinement
Let's exchange some tales and jokes
And open a door of lime-green world
Liberate your welcoming eyes
I want to glimpse the entrance of heaven.
When you're near
I can't explain what's going on inside
How can I declare
you're more than moon in my sky?
I play, rewind and play yesterdays
like a cassette
Feel you full-time
I'm confined in your cell like sim card.
Poem 06
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
I agree with Onelia A's comments and also say I really enjoyed the poem, but I have a problem as I have difficulty finding my cell-phone.
Hi, I will really say that your poems are catching. Dare from Lekki lagos.Nigeria
This is a cute love poem.... nicely written and very original.....
the metaphors are exquisite in your lime green world and deserve a 10 cheers Shimon
What a lovely confinement...... i love it... great ideas.....10
this is a very natural poem of love in a cyber age and it could happen to anyone, anytime. beautiful! 10 smiles for you, sir!
You have created a totally different style here, your own. Its interesting to read and enoyable.
A very interesting, delightful and different romantic poem. Good work! Loyd
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The beginning 'Let’s exchange some tales and jokes' prepares for the light ironic end 'I’m confined in your cell like sim card'. I like this strange but quite appropriate metaphor.