Some kids in a playground
playing the round
of your dad is my dad...
suddenly found
that their dad
was her dad,
but..
she made no sound
because her dad
was his dad
who was playing a round
with more kids
that were his...
he was renowned
all over town.
Brilliant one Sally - I'm definitely confused but not surprised - it's the way of the world these days! !
Not so confused-we are all one big happy (?) family, right?
Like your title..it is confused. I am hunger to know who he is! ! really interesting poem...keep it up fri
this pervasive blight of the single parent...and fractured family unit...portrayed with some emotion and exasperation. ***
A thoughtful write, so many children have mum and dad living apart, some must be very confused.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so mysterious and amazing one.! the title should exactly be that.he he...Confused..! i think that question mark should be removed, because it really is confused! Really fine and Good