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My words desert me
So anything can hurt me without you
Just the little things get to me
You’re here to help me up the mountain
So what happens now
There is no lack in fight or love for you
It doesn’t matter what anyone says
There is only a few who really speak up
When they do they are just jealous of the passion that we share
I had to change
I had to climb up that hill that I’ve been at the bottom for so long
For no longer will I stay behind that glass door
Where no one can see the part of me that makes me
Me
Before you everyone saw the reflection of who I am
Now when I’m with you they see the real me
That is why I love you
You’re the one that gave me the courage and the strength
To smash that glass door and step into the light with you
Or that was the case two months ago
But
From the sound of my heart breaking
Your voice only telling it that you love her
And that you don’t love me comes
The tears of loneliness
I couldn’t change it you were going to break my heart
I already knew
Before you whispered into my soul that night on the floor
Every night could be a fantasy for you and me
Only if you would give me a chance
For this is only my second dance
My heart was unprepared to be hit with a ton of bricks
My heart and body hurt from the trauma
My eyes hurt from the tears I’ve cried
I can’t fight this feeling
This feeling of worthlessness and lonesome
I want to be in your arms
I want to see your blue eyes glisten into mine
I want to feel your kiss
I need to hear your charming voice saying that you love me
I will get over you
Even though I have slid back to the bottom
Of that hill I just got done climbing
I will make it to top
Because I will die standing on my feet
Rather then live on my knees
Because you simply couldn’t be mine
Mrs. Cynosure
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Friday, October 17, 2008 |
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Monday, March 30, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Couldn't Be Mine*
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Okan Emanet (4/28/2009 1:48:00 PM)
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Really effective style. You have such a mastering talent that in every line you leave an outstanding trace on me. Really good job Well done
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Sierra Love (12/23/2008 9:08:00 PM)
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Beautiful...really beautiful.
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Lesten White-Pigeon (12/20/2008 2:09:00 AM)
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great poem....i understand fully..cant wait to read more of what you have!
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Sebastine Humaemo (12/13/2008 12:42:00 AM)
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a strong write crystal......show's how much a girl cries in her heart when she comes to know, her loved one goin to depart for ever.....thanks for sharing...sebastine...
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Aijaz Asif (12/10/2008 4:37:00 PM)
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a very beautiful and strong write becca, specia; ; y these 2 lines i loved most...thanks 10+++++
because I will die standing on my feet
rather then live on my knees....bravo, bravo
rgds
asif
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Saint Cynosure (11/10/2008 8:37:00 PM)
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I have yet another poem of yours that I love so much...
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Jean Cherubin (10/29/2008 9:33:00 PM)
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I really enjoyed this poem great job
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