Criticisms Quick To Share Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Criticisms Quick To Share



From one side of an open mouth,
Accustomed to judging...
With criticisms quick to share,
One is heard to deliver...
'Holier-than-thou' statements,
To use from sources to inflict...
Upon others their knowledge.
But an absence of it seen,
Conflicts with that which departs from their lips.

And...
From the other side of this mouth open wide,
It is confided to anyone within listening distance...
How one finds it difficult to go through the day,
Without being medicated or in a 'toasted' way...
To enhance one's feeling of devoted faith kept.
With a solid belief one makes sure is always on,
In a public display that is flawless.
And fresh from a stupor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 February 2012

Lawrence, Believe me or not. Your poem seems to be the perfect comment that you have written for your own poem. Good Try. Good day to you..

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