Cruel Probability Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Cruel Probability

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I was looking for love,
and when I said Someone,
can You love me?
The One replied, "Have you ever loved yourself? "
Tears came in my eyes!
"Perhaps not.", I replied.
"I am in you and I share all that you feel,
when you'll love yourself,
I shall share it with you."
"So You share my pains and pleasures.
What of misdeeds? "
"Yes, I share your misdeeds,
but then I change it in tolerance,
off course in elastic limits."
"And what if I break the limits? "
"I break out and leave you alone! "
"So You leave me at the mercy of cruel probability! "
"Up to a certain extent,
you are almost right."

Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cruelty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2019

Misdeeds! ! ! Cruelty! Wickedness; We need peace than, Hatred and war. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 19 August 2016

Cruel but also I feel it real. very nice to read

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Kelly Kurt 01 June 2016

Another amazingly deep poem from the mind of Akhtar Jawad.

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Khalid Saifullah 01 June 2016

A philosophic thought, liked it.

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