Cry 4 Her Poem by gary hicinbothem

Cry 4 Her

Rating: 4.5


As days go bye and tears for in my eyes,
I cry because she is not in my sight,
I want to do well but I want to fight,
Since we’ve got together,
I new my lie would be right,
I wonder if I can love somebody that I don’t know,
Because who knows she might be ju5t putting on a show,
Is what I feel love,

I wish I could get ju5t one hug,
Even know we don know each other can we bond,
Can I relationship go on, this is a poem not a song,
I hope this will go on,
Even if I cant see her beautiful face,

I love her I don’t care about her race,
I cry every night and feel like blood running down my cheeks,
Because I can not see her,
My eyes burn this poem is over it’s her turn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Douglass (Fifita) 31 December 2008

Beautiful poem. Sad though, but it prove how much you loved her, which is sweet.

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 26 December 2008

This is a great poem.10+.

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

I love her I don’t care about her race, I cry every night and feel like blood running down my cheeks, Because I can not see her, you shouldnt care about her race if you love her. the blood running down your cheeks is a great image for your reader. this gets your emotion across well, very sad. good job. Becca

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