Treasure Island

RIC S. BASTASA


crying in the shower my friend


crying in the shower is such a waste of time
take away the shower and let us restructure the line

crying is such a waste of time

remove time and supply the proper word

crying is such a waste of


tears.

reserve your tears for some joys

i mean,

there is such thing

as tears of joy

and don't waste so much time crying in the shower

someone next to you who sings while bathing in the shower

may use the same

he is much better a proper user.

Submitted: Friday, August 29, 2008
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