Cupid's Arrow Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Cupid's Arrow

Rating: 5.0


The arrow of Cupid got stuck
On the calendar on 14th Feb
The lovers heart bleeds profusely
Year after year and the world enjoys
Celebrating and beating around
Several roses are plugged
To please the bubbling hearts
New hopes and new promises
Things will be same the following day...

Monday, February 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: valentines day,cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2021

All excellent metaphors for an amazing Valentine's poem, Asim Sir! 5 Stars and more amor encore. Constantly fascinating read. I have enormously enjoyed.. Very thoughtful verses. I like it a very lot!

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Captain Cur 15 February 2021

Bleeding hearts plugged by roses. An apt metaphor. This is why I cannot close my calendar, that darn arrow sticking out of Feb 14. Great lines, provoking and thoughtful.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 February 2021

So true! New hopes and new promises Things will be same the following day...

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Varsha M 16 February 2021

Hahaha sir. How much ever be it transient, love remains elegent and on top so even though death follows, they live those best moments.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 February 2021

Great write. Cupid stupid tradition but some wont miss it for anything

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2021

Wonderful poem.

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Jaishree Nair 17 February 2021

Yes.The naughty Cupid comes forth on this day to trap many more in the lovers web... Aptly written.A 5

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Poetic Sky 17 February 2021

Simply superb. New hopes and new promises Things will be same the following day...

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me poet yeps poet 17 February 2021

BEAUTIFUL VALENTINE FOR HER SHE LOVES YOU DEAR HOW NICE TO SIR MAN NOW AGAIN TO YOU HEAR PH WILL RISE LIKE A PHOENIX THIS ALL MUST HEAR AND ENDEAR

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Deepak S S 16 February 2021

Aptly written poem.

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