The arrow of Cupid got stuck
On the calendar on 14th Feb
The lovers heart bleeds profusely
Year after year and the world enjoys
Celebrating and beating around
Several roses are plugged
To please the bubbling hearts
New hopes and new promises
Things will be same the following day...
Bleeding hearts plugged by roses. An apt metaphor. This is why I cannot close my calendar, that darn arrow sticking out of Feb 14. Great lines, provoking and thoughtful.
So true! New hopes and new promises Things will be same the following day...
Hahaha sir. How much ever be it transient, love remains elegent and on top so even though death follows, they live those best moments.
Great write. Cupid stupid tradition but some wont miss it for anything
Yes.The naughty Cupid comes forth on this day to trap many more in the lovers web... Aptly written.A 5
Simply superb. New hopes and new promises Things will be same the following day...
BEAUTIFUL VALENTINE FOR HER SHE LOVES YOU DEAR HOW NICE TO SIR MAN NOW AGAIN TO YOU HEAR PH WILL RISE LIKE A PHOENIX THIS ALL MUST HEAR AND ENDEAR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
All excellent metaphors for an amazing Valentine's poem, Asim Sir! 5 Stars and more amor encore. Constantly fascinating read. I have enormously enjoyed.. Very thoughtful verses. I like it a very lot!