Daguerrotype Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Daguerrotype

Rating: 5.0


In the dark room of severe crises
It's is an early kind of photograph for the Exhibition.
And it takes a certain time,
But be confident and give your full support to get the finish off.
Probably this could be one of the best sepia photographs
That would hang in the White(boarding) House.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 08 November 2008

As every Maestro, an excellent piece of poetry. economic and thoroughly witty. The first line appears to long for the page, perhaps it might work if you cut it. The line ‘And it takes a certain time’ has such a wonderful impact and is so full of many interpretations, because it seems ambiguous. As it is the joins your otherworldliness and insightful collection.

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Sandra Fowler 07 November 2008

very skillfully and cleverly delivered. I agree with your last lines. And approve of your unique style. which has stood you in good stead for well over eight hundred excellent offerings. Keep writing. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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