Darkness Poem by Sanju Roy

Darkness

Rating: 5.0


I wish this world of darkness would come to an end
I lost a girl, I lost a friend
I'd give it all back if I only could
I've said it a million times, I know I would
I miss her more and more every day
She leave me, and my world is dark and grey
My life is a cloud of endless rain
I wish I could escape the endless pain
What's the point of living if she's leave me
There is no sun, there is no dawn
In my endless world of darkness.

Sunday, November 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 22 November 2015

Desperation by love lost or rejection is evident from each word of the poem. Thinking that such a situation means an end of life itself is wrong. One must take life in it's stride and forgetting the past one must allow life to move on. Renounce negative thoughts and adopt positive approach to lead a beautiful life waiting for you. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Sanju Roy 26 November 2015

Thank you

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Lalgola. Murshidabad
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