Darkness Of Love Poem by Fluorescent Reality

Darkness Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Tell me why I am waiting,
For something to wish upon,
Something to give me hope.
Beacause all I have been given,
Is a long loveless life.
Nobody here to comfort.
Or to give love

Darkness falls in my loveless life.
Fifth shot down, still bit lazy
Tenth shot down, gets a little hazy
Stumble round, call someone crazy.
“Tell me why the liqueur isn’t helping?
Tell me why I don’t want to face life?
Tell me why I dream of a bloody death?
Tell me why, please, just tell me why?

How can I live, when I live for you?
How can I love, when you’re all I love?
How can I see, when you’re my eyes?
How do I drive away, when you have the keys?
How do I fly, when you’re my wings?

When I’m alone, you’re my shadow
When I cry, you’re my shoulder
When I need to be happy, it’s your smile
When I need a friend, it’s you'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fluorescent Reality 17 January 2012

i don't need the same style throughout, that's part of the social context behind me, my mind isn't in one place it's all over the place. i can't think straight and i have no direction to go in... it's confusing for you but it's part of my style. live with it :)

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Aylin Lp 16 January 2012

that's very good, it's just that you've got 4 different bits (fantastic bits) but it's like they all belong to different poems so you need to keep the same style throughout the whole poem and i'm sure it'll work out: P

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 January 2012

Tears bubble up in my eyes! The sweetest song is the saddest song.Tell me why, please just tell me why? You are alone inspired to write such lines. A mellifluous song like Tamil film songs. Cheers!

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