Darned Socks Inside Polished Shoes Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Darned Socks Inside Polished Shoes

Rating: 5.0


My daydream is to walk one day
hand-in-hand with a lover
on a lonely beach.
But I am scared
if she ask me to remove the shoes
for convenience.


to the lovers who go hand-in-hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 17 August 2006

You are a ROCKSTAR! Such well written poem. Preets

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Joseph Daly 13 August 2006

Clothes maketh the man. A lovely poinient piece Nimal. just enough words to say what has to be said.

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Duncan Wyllie 13 August 2006

If she looks closely she will see that it is the socks that were darned with such care and not the polish that tried to hide them, that really matters Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 13 August 2006

A bit wistful and vulnerable. But daydreams are fragile at best. The power of the poet's rich imagination is always at his disposal.He can simply paint another dreamscape that is more favorable to his mood. A very fine poem, Nimal. Sandra

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David Tanguay 13 August 2006

Why do your feet smell?

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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