Days In The Shade Poem by Hazel Durham
Days In The Shade
Sunshine is polishing so fine, over this sweet land,
With a shimmer that glimmers like golden sand,
The sun is like a giant, overripe peach,
Dripping with strong rays,
Across all the Irish bays,
With plenty of glistening skin,
Just like marble, on display.
I'm in a landlocked phase,
With inward uncertainty, in a settled haze,
Longing for the ocean,
With still my dreams in motion,
Ideas lunge towards me, as I try to make them seem unreal,
Living in a stagnant ebb,
Like I'm immersed in a complex web,
Trees free my enclosed spirit,
With the rustle of wind, shaking undernourished thoughts,
Longing for more freedom,
That can't be bought.
In this sunny season, when at times I have no reason,
Just loving you, is seeing me through,
A complicated wave of surging problems,
With relentless force,
Eating away at our hearts source,
I feel I have to teach you to change course,
So that our love will be complete,
But will days in the shade,
Be our defeat?
You always write beautifully crafted lyric poetry. There's always a tinge of sadness or little melancholy. It must be your sweet Irish heritage. I too am in a land locked phase wishing to be near the sea. Great Poem 10/10 BB
.....its flows smoothly like silk........this poem is adorned with some beautiful lines in there, , , , , , ...........I'm in a landlocked phase, With inward uncertainty, in a settled haze, , , , , , , , , , , , , lovely write Hazel.............a 10! .
Beautiful...it seems like I'm flowing with the tides when reading this one. Perfect rhythm. Truly superb.
You write like waves sweeping on the beach face...so beautiful and resonating_Soul
I'm in a landlocked phase, With inward uncertainty, in a settled haze, Living in a stagnant ebb, Like I'm immersed in a complex web, Some of the great lines in the poem! I enjoyed the whole! !
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love is complete whole, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.