Dead flower was alone in the middle of old trees
He was the only soft creature among them
His head was on the ground, he didn't breath
Now we will hear the story of his death? ? ? ? ? :
At first he was a simple seed that Mr. Wind carried him to an unknown jungle
He was on the air for a while, looking down for finding a place to live in
But these things were out of his control, yes, he was at the mercy of DESTINY! ! !
Then, destiny sent him in the middle of an empty place without any creature
He uses the beam of sun, uses the water of black and white clouds…
He was glad of his life…….But Mr. Wind was still bringing seeds to that place, to the place of our flower
The flower grow older, but he started to nag for all the time, he never ever thanks because of his condition
A time arrived that he imagined that he is the king of that kingdom.
Wow, such a flesh kingdom!
Those seeds which were brought there with Mr. Wind, now were growing, but they were still shorter than that flower
So, the chances were still for him to leading that place…..
He did his all try to destroy those seeds, but he couldn't….
At last the seeds grow up and got old, they turn in big and beautiful trees.
From that time they were the king of that place
Then, that flower saw no light from sun, because of those long trees
It received no water, because the roots of the trees were stronger
And our nasty beautiful flower died…
Among that beautiful nature, he could live better, he could think about others
And if he did it at that time, now he would breathe…
But, it's like our life, the people aren't like each other, they don't ask SAME QUESTIONS,
And also they don't act like each other.
In the nature, we have the same story….
The trees opened a way of sun's beam for that poor flower,
They sent their watery roots for him..
Then, the red flower woke up with a red beam…
Trees and only flower were good friends from that time,
They never ever bother
Because they were like unique brothers…
Great dude. It's good poem with personification and good use of nature. Keep on doing well bro.
i simply have no words for this poem, , one of your best poem i must say, , , , creativity shown in writing this was totally outstanding, , , , , loved it to the core..... respect, , , , keep writing, , , ,
true poem dude.....those who don't use the oppurtunities in front, end up like this.....grt poem...kp writting.... nice comparison....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem, a nice story being told again...the meaning just so great In our life we should concern about others that's the best to take and live everyday..keep it up_Unwritten Soul