Death is the most difficult truth to face
because it really leaves a trace
It breaks the heart forever
you can't forget it 'NEVER'
but life go on by force
it runs like the horse
But we must survive,
and don't give up to sorrow of life.
Our hearts must be full with faith
So the surrender will be erased without leaving a trace.
i dont like talking about death because it is the most shocking fact.but well done merna keep it up omar ibrahim(cairo-EGYPT)
Very nice poem friend when we learn how to smile on worries........ there life wins 10
i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.
i love this poem, it's words came straight from your heart u said what's inside our heart&mind.
Excellent poem expressing the philosophy of death very effectively. The poem is rich both in imagery and depth. Elegant write
Your death philosophy is readable And if somebody could erase the name Give a substitute, As we're fed up of that unvarnished name?
i think u mean dying alive...right? ? ? anyways very nice one...well done :)
'Our hearts must be full with faith So the surrender will be erased without leaving a trace.' That's good write. Very meaningful and expressive poem Enjoyed reading it 10+
this is actually so meaningfull....and expressive...nice rhyming...well done :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You did well in dealing with a difficult subject. Keep writing.