negar shahnouri

Rookie (21 jan 1986 / iran)

death and birthday!


day after tomorrow is my birthday
but i wont celebrate it, no, noway

there will be no party, lets say sorry in advance
you left me in my BD, how lucky iam, what a chance,

do you need a party, ok fine
you, tears and gloom are invited, our appoinment will be at 9!

candles candles look how madly i do cry
so stop dancing infront of my tearfull eye

there is a knife beside the cake
, do you mean i have to commit suicide?
ok close your eyes, close, now open, i have died!

Submitted: Sunday, January 18, 2009
Edited: Monday, February 09, 2009

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  • Freshman - 1,206 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/1/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    Your flair for the dark, and abstract is well demonstrated here...I have always been facinated by the likes of Poe, Dickinson, Teasdale, and Stephen King, and their darting penchant for the eerie & morose...Nice Work, Negar!

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