Death Perpetrated Poem by C. P. Sharma

Death Perpetrated

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Pink roses for love designed,
In pink city kindness intertwined,
Here no place for hatred you find;
Then why was it with terror maligned?

Perhaps the terror loves not mankind,
It is the product of Satan's mind;
Never ending stream of blood unwind,
No godly consent in it you ever find.

God is great, God is kind,
God is always in love Christened,
Leaves not untimely wailing behind,
Lord is the Savior of mankind.

O Lord, let good sense in bloody mind prevail,
Nowhere repeat Jaipur like dead bodies trail..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sir, you have eloquently captured the one & only proverbial ''light at the end of the tunnel''', that if subscribed to, by the people of Jaipur, the way your work here, so as your pen so smoothly alludes to, wioll prove as the panacea & peerless choice of cope & closure to this armageddon chapter in their grace-pure history. Fine work, inded...and delivered with power & passion. I look forward to sharing future reads & critique with you. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Vaibhav Shah 22 May 2008

The structure of this poem is interesting.Though written in the form of a sonnet, It has a unique rhyme scheme.The emotions are really powerful and insist the readers to think on it.The pink city has been assaulted in such a brutal way that it has left every man in a state of havoc.But I hope that the terrorism is now counting it'slast days.God has decided to annihilate it completely from this world.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 21 April 2009

God is great God is kind Only that he is late we mind...good work

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 February 2009

blindness..total blindness..what a beautiful world with such a lot of variety..everybody should last..let this be the last..my lord

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 June 2008

India is a peace loving country and never fought with other nations for any material gains, but influenced other countries with its spiritualism. This kind of terrorism is nothing but madness of misguided people still living amidst our peace loving people. A timely poem from the pen of Sharmaji.

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2008

a good and honest prayer from a good hearted great poetic soul...never will remain unheard... ten for the poem's beauty and content

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Bob Blackwell 27 May 2008

A great plea and prayer for common sense. Bob

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