Debt Poem by Violet Val
Debt
This cage I call consciousness
Reminds me everyday
Of mistakes I have yet to pay
This awareness tries its best
To decipher a way;
To get this old soul some rest
More Sinner than a Saint
I loiter among mortals
Who like me are drowning in their reality
Day and night
Can 'it' be made right?
I walk, shouting in my ear every mistake
I have ever made
i really enjoyed reading this poem... it reminds me of some stuff i think about everynight befor bed... i wont go into detail as it is personal... but im adding this to my favorite poems list.. thanks for shareing it
This cage I call consciousness Reminds me everyday Of mistakes I have yet to pay The debt we owe to ourselves. Great write, Catatonic..........10/10.
We question what we do through life, its good for the soul to reflect, it allows us in time to move on. Its finding the key to the restraints thats the hard bit. Great piece
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5/4/2024 7:45:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It only gets stronger here. I felt the force behind this. The message is couldnt be any clearer. At odds with self and seeking 'sanctification'. This is a work of genius. Carry on.10/10