Deception - Never Learned Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Deception - Never Learned
In her dreams she was laughing
I was crying and awake
her body was moving as if in dance
my heart was beating like boiling bubbles
She was in happy state as she revealed the truth
I was in nightmare to cove the falsehood.
We were in contrasting style
I was looking down, she was dreaming high
To say the truth is like lighten your heart
to conceal the truth is carrying burden on your back
I decided to spill the beans
Morning I was behind the bars, she was a dancing queen
Even in dreams she knew the art of lying
Even in my awake state I failed to learn the lessons.
You are the master of expressing different aspects of life. You have wisely crafted the contrast ideas in the poem. Great work. Loved the last couplet.
And one of the best I have read of yours poems.10 Marvelous points
Even in dreams she knew the art of lying Even in my awake state I failed to learn the lessons. Truly beautiful..............
Truth is always better even if you have to suffer because of it.Good write Asim, God Bless u.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 10:19:32 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The poem is a revelation of life's truths which you have done with remarkable ease. Thanks. I would like to quote a couple of lines from the poem to prove it: To say the truth is like lighten your heart to conceal the truth is carrying burden on your back
Thanks much Rajnishji, I admire your comments,